Narrative writing

It was one lovely day at the park me Dreshaun and Jackson was swinging on the swings and after about 30 minutes we hear ‘POOF!’ as a whole gust of smoke goes everywhere and under the smoke is the most giantest most stinkiest most terrifying FOOT! We didn't have a weapon so all we had was cheese for a snack so we started throwing it at the foot and saying “THROW THE CHEESE!” we started throwing and throwing and then it fell down and “BOOOOM” as the foot hits the ground we go over and we see a hobo lying down “so apparently that was his foot???” I said mysteriously a guy comes out of his mouth and says “Hi my name is Tyler i got eaten i'm with my friend Dylan say Hi”  “Hi!” Dylan says we start taking pics of it and sending it to all our friends.  After a while of posting it on insta and sending it to everyone we start walking home then we hear “BOOM.” “BOOM..” “BOOM…” we turn around and we see the giant hobo again but this time he picked up our cheese and started throwing it at US!! But you could probably guess what happens next

Kennedy Park

I was in my room and then i hear my mum say “Get packed we're going to Kennedy Park!” so i started packing “1. Computer 2. phone 3. hoverboard 4. scooter” i said. when i was done i went in the car and we started driving of to Kennedy park.

After a while we arrived.

straight away we see kids running, kids jumping on a massive bouncing pillow , kids on bikes, kids on scooters, kids on a tramp. So you get the idea a massive fun land were u can get a apartment. We drived up and my Mum got out and we got an apartment i waited then we unpacked and went inside. Obviously i went straight onto the tramp some random reason i wanted to go to the pool so bad but i wasn't unpacked so i waited.

My mum told me I could go so I got my togs on and went straight to the pool. There were two pools one was pretty deep and one was a baby pool and it was shallow I went in the pretty deep one and swimmed I hopped out after a while oh yeah I forgot to say. There were a lot of people in the pretty deep one.

After I went back on the tramp and came back to the apartment my mum said to me that my cousin and my friend Patrick was here I felt bad not playing with my cousin instead my friend but to be honest I liked my friend way better so I hanged out with my friend. Luckily/disappointedly my friend had to leave I was annoyed and happy. Happy because I could play with my cousin and she would not be alone and sad and disappointed because my friend won't play with me and I like my friend patrick better.

I started playing with my cousin the bad thing was I had to leave the next day I said by to everyone at kennedy park and we went in the car and drived of.