Narrative writing

It was one lovely day at the park me Dreshaun and Jackson was swinging on the swings and after about 30 minutes we hear ‘POOF!’ as a whole gust of smoke goes everywhere and under the smoke is the most giantest most stinkiest most terrifying FOOT! We didn't have a weapon so all we had was cheese for a snack so we started throwing it at the foot and saying “THROW THE CHEESE!” we started throwing and throwing and then it fell down and “BOOOOM” as the foot hits the ground we go over and we see a hobo lying down “so apparently that was his foot???” I said mysteriously a guy comes out of his mouth and says “Hi my name is Tyler i got eaten i'm with my friend Dylan say Hi”  “Hi!” Dylan says we start taking pics of it and sending it to all our friends.  After a while of posting it on insta and sending it to everyone we start walking home then we hear “BOOM.” “BOOM..” “BOOM…” we turn around and we see the giant hobo again but this time he picked up our cheese and started throwing it at US!! But you could probably guess what happens next

Kennedy Park

I was in my room and then i hear my mum say “Get packed we're going to Kennedy Park!” so i started packing “1. Computer 2. phone 3. hoverboard 4. scooter” i said. when i was done i went in the car and we started driving of to Kennedy park.

After a while we arrived.

straight away we see kids running, kids jumping on a massive bouncing pillow , kids on bikes, kids on scooters, kids on a tramp. So you get the idea a massive fun land were u can get a apartment. We drived up and my Mum got out and we got an apartment i waited then we unpacked and went inside. Obviously i went straight onto the tramp some random reason i wanted to go to the pool so bad but i wasn't unpacked so i waited.

My mum told me I could go so I got my togs on and went straight to the pool. There were two pools one was pretty deep and one was a baby pool and it was shallow I went in the pretty deep one and swimmed I hopped out after a while oh yeah I forgot to say. There were a lot of people in the pretty deep one.

After I went back on the tramp and came back to the apartment my mum said to me that my cousin and my friend Patrick was here I felt bad not playing with my cousin instead my friend but to be honest I liked my friend way better so I hanged out with my friend. Luckily/disappointedly my friend had to leave I was annoyed and happy. Happy because I could play with my cousin and she would not be alone and sad and disappointed because my friend won't play with me and I like my friend patrick better.

I started playing with my cousin the bad thing was I had to leave the next day I said by to everyone at kennedy park and we went in the car and drived of.

Holidays

I was in my room and then i hear my mum say “Get packed we're going to Kennedy Park!” so i started packing “1. Computer 2. phone 3. hoverboard 4. scooter” i said. when i was done i went in the car and we started driving of to Kennedy park.

After a while we arrived.

straight away we see kids running, kids jumping on a massive bouncing pillow , kids on bikes, kids on scooters, kids on a tramp. So you get the idea a massive fun land were u can get a apartment. We drived up and my Mum got out and we got an apartment i waited then we unpacked and went inside. Obviously i went straight onto the tramp some random reason i wanted to go to the pool so bad but i wasn't unpacked so i waited.

My mum told me i could go so i got my togs on and went straight to the pool. There were two pools one was pretty deep and one was a baby pool and was shallow i went in the pretty deep one and swimmed i hopped out after a while oh yeah i forgot to say. There were a lot of people in the pretty deep one.

After i went back on the tramp and came back to the apartment my mum said to me that my cousin and my friend Patrick was here i felt bad not playing with my cousin instead my friend but to be honest i liked my friend way better so i hanged out with my friend. Luckily/disapointly my friend had to leave i was annoyed and happy. Happy because i could play with my cousin and she would not be alone and sad and disappointed because my friend won't play with me and i like my friend patrick better.

I started playing with my cousin the bad thing was i had to leave the next day i said by to everyone at kennedy park and we went in the car and drived of.

pigeon madness

Ohh a bagel” I said in my mind I saw a guy with a suit like an agent he ran across the road all the cars were beeping at him  while he was crossing the road. I saw him cross the road then he smacked into a tree well almost.. Well then i was just watching and watching then he suddenly stole a briefcase of a guy. After That I decided to go other their and get that bagel so I did what a pigeon would always do just sit and wait until. He picked a bit of the bagel of and throw it away near me.  Then I saw it but I saw a bit of dirt on it so I said in my mind i'm not getting that. The guy looked at me really weirdly so I just thought to myself I should get that so that's what a I did but I slipped and I fell in the briefcase that he stole it was so dark.

I saw a small button so I pressed it it opened a thing that had another button that was bigger so I thought what if it makes bagels! ‘Beeb’ I pressed it I don't see no bagel I said desperately but when i pressed it I heard a gunshot then i kept pressing it and pressing  it until ‘beeb’ I pressed a nuke button “haha I said”

‘Kaboom!!’ I heard I turned around and saw a huge rocket blasting off to space

Kaboom the rocket exploded.

Holidays

Roooom roooom!! As the car drove out of the driveway my brother yelled “Off to Kennedy Park!!!” I said “Yayyyyyy!” Then we were off to Kennedy Park! We parked in the luxury car park, it was so nice. When I got out of the car the wind went WHOOSH in my face. It was so much fun their. As soon as I got out the car I went straight to the bouncy pillow which is basically a huge trampoline shaped like a pillow. There were so many people on it and by so many I mean about 15 or more!

After I had some fun on the pillow I went to the actual trampolines and I learnt how to sideflip, which is a trampoline trick. When I went back to my cabin I found out that my cousin Mikayla was there. I was damn excited! Straight away I asked her to go to the pool with me. Then... guess what I did! i did a backflip in the pool! it was crazy. I thought to myself, maybe I could do it on a trampoline?

When I got out of the pool I decided to try it. Then, I remembered the last time I tried it I almost broke my neck so I changed my mind. I stayed on the trampoline until bedtime.

The next day I went to go to the bouncy pillow when I saw a pedal cart come up to me and my friend Patrick was in it! Straight away I said “I didn’t know you were coming!” he said “Like my new ride?” he laughed, then he said “Get on the back!” and I said “Let's go”.

I brought my phone with me so I could check how fast we were going on Snapchat. The speed limit for cars was 10 kph but we went 13 kph! Patrick said “We went over the speed limit!” I said “Let's go all around the park and see what's here.” After all of that I remembered my cousin Mikayla, so I quickly said “Go check on my cousin!” We hurried over there to see if she was ok but when we got there my cousin had made a friend! The girl was 6 years old and could do a backflip and a back handspring and basically everything else! Together we decided to go and check out Patrick’s cabin.

Patrick’s cabin was so cool! Well it wasn't a cabin, it was a camper van. That day was Easter so Patrick said “Wanna do an Easter egg hunt?” and straight away I said “yes!” We found lots of eggs! At the end Patrick sadly had to go. I was bored so I decided to do stuff by myself.

The next day I had to go home. I said to everyone “It was a good trip, but now we have to go. Bye everyone!” I yelled and we started the long drive home.

CHILLING

Kayaking at Green Pastures

Boom as a massive splash comes from my kayak I get in the shiny yellow bright kayak and our camp parent named Liam hands my the long paddle to me. In my head i was thinking i wish this paddle was  litter as I swung it back and forward it was so tiring as my muscles burn of. I kept going and going tho until... smash! as my kayak smacks into the grass wall of death. But luckily i got out just when someone else was coming after i got out i just lied in my kayak for a bet and took a rest until i was ready to paddle again. when  rested for a bet i was paddle as hard as i can and it felt like my skin was peeling off because of how tiring it was. I finally made it to where everyone else were then after i did some kayaking we had to leave..

I was annoyed and bored so I decided to ask to dive in the lake Jamie did a Manu and Kayde I just jumped in and Ash did a bomb. I went out of the water and I saw that everyone was leaving so I caught up. When I made it to the people we went to a new activity raft building 

                                                                                          

School triathlon

Click Click BANG! Everyone sprinted i started to catch up with everyone and then everyone just got faster! And zoomed past me so i was scared i was gonna be last. Then i started to go faster i went way faster than everyone. But then i started to get really tired and i was not even half way! Then i was gonna be last. The raced finished i came like 13th then we had to go to the bikes to get on our bike i got on my bike and peddled as fast as i can then i past lots people i thought it was over but no it was not we had to do 2 laps!. After we did the biking we had to take our shirt of and shoes and go to the pool and swim all the way to the end after that we were done we went to the field and cheered people on.

My Tagul

Christmas

I woke up went downstairs and guess what my mum said. She said “don't come in yet you need to wait!” And I was like “what…” So I had to wait like 10 minutes

So I did. Then I could finally come in I came in and then I saw presents! So I said “when can we open them””then she let me open them so obviously I picked the big on first.” “And it was a hoverboard then I went to the second big one and…  it was a new computer and those were the things I got.